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Red Sun

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Red Sun

Slipping from the edge of earth reluctant to say farewell, the red sun keeps me spellbound, pledging to return
_____________ For Russell's Contest: Red Sun Dodoitsu 6/23/13

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  1. Date: 8/3/2013 7:26:00 PM

    Belated big congratulations my dear friend Carrie for the super win and the other recent wins! Thanks for sharing this precious gem you've shared this morning. I love it and so enjoyed! Happy wkend! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 4:30:00 PM

    Congrats on your descriptive winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 2:23:00 PM

    what I mean to say... was WOW! I love the imagery Carrie, you sure know how to awake them words... love it...SKAT

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 2:22:00 PM

    Carrie, I'm going over a few of the contest again. thank you for taking us to the edge of the earth... i felt the fall myself... .... congrats *****SKAT

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 5:38:00 PM

    Great imagery in these spectacular lines...congratulations on your well deserved win :)

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 5:15:00 PM

    Congratulations, Carrie, the sun never fails to return despite the clouds that put us in doubt. Strong piece

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 5:04:00 PM

    Short but full of beauty, congrats Carrie xxx

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 3:24:00 PM

    Carrie congratulation on your fantastic win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 8:54:00 AM

    Carrie, this is perfectly done... COngrats on your win... Hugs... Jake

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 12:18:00 PM

    Love the imagery here Carrie!Beautiful Tanka.

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 9:55:00 AM

    Hi Carrie. Love this little piece! Been too busy here but hope to have more time soon. Stay sweet....Caleb

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 2:25:00 AM

    Beautiful poem Carrie. :)

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 2:45:00 AM

    Lovely write Carrie. Well done. AO

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 5:28:00 PM

    another wonderful gem ....best wishes

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 3:46:00 PM

    And return it shall, for your heart's desire beckons so , beautiful verse Carrie, xxx

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 3:14:00 PM

    nice one, carrie! i like it...