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Below is the poem entitled Hate which was written by poet Granola Bars. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Washed away sitting in my bedroom 
Windows sit open flowers can't bloom

Endless procedures continue to resume
Can't live a normal life with a dirty room

Watch my mind begin to sit and unfold
Logic doesn't matter so I catch a cold

Forget to shower again today
Self hate takes over and I fade away

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  1. Date: 6/23/2013 6:00:00 PM
    Sad lines that you have penned..I hope just a write about the topic of feeling depressed and not about your life..Sara

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    Date: 6/23/2013 9:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I take this as a compliment. I'll eventually write something about the sole fact of being in depression. Don't worry. Thank you, Sara.
  1. Date: 6/23/2013 12:10:00 PM
    I have read every one of your poems Will be following your work Rose

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    Date: 6/23/2013 3:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am glad that you are going to follow it. I will do the same for you. Great writings, Rose. Thank you.