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Pitch Perfect Dreams

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Pitch Perfect Dreams

              Pitch perfect I hear them say.
             Though bullet proof is my heart.
             I count my blessings in every way.
           Quotes of love on pages of times gone by.
             In my dreams you were always my hero.

                   Did you bewitch me?
                Because I thought it was love.
              Love thru the ages is what I felt.
           Must of been my rose colored glasses.
            Thought it was a love to last forever.

             You were nothing short of my everything.
         In dreams of love there were no impossibilities.
       As the dreams of old come crawling thru me today.
        I dream of rainbows and being in love with you .
      Now I know our love was only convoluted fantasy.   

6/ 6/ 2013  Thursday
As a teenager, My mother used to tell me to take my rose colored glasses off and see people how they really are, Of course , I always said: I do see mom ;}

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  1. Date: 1/29/2014 4:54:00 PM

    Love love might be what you think it may, or time to spend with, owed today, perchamce its written fore we come, is this your part young tweedledum? preplanned a mission hey... thinks..the..stumble-bum, slipped subtle quip hooray :{ Don

  1. Date: 8/10/2013 7:16:00 PM

    beutiful, and very cute, well written!! -Heather

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 11:25:00 AM

    The beauty of fantasy, and its limits in reality, Great poem, Debbie, very expressive. Check out some of mine. Might find one you like.

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 5:18:00 PM

    Lovely Debbie, I think we've all been bewitched at one time or another, that's the easy part eh. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 9:43:00 PM

    Aw....yes...reality at its best told well...

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 8:19:00 PM

    Reality always waits in the wings , just off stage while the dreamers dance. You have a great insight Debbie.

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 6:43:00 PM

    This is glorious, Debbie. Thank you so much for your visits! Your poetry is so interesting and this one in particular is very dreamy ..i like your note at the end. Cute. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 4:15:00 PM

    yes, this happens. And you tell it so well. VERY nice one, Deb.

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 9:43:00 AM

    Freedom in the knowing, eh? Good stuff, Debbie. daver

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 8:11:00 AM

    It is the greatest betrayal and you have penned it's essence. Very moving piece. I hope you found the real thing.

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 4:37:00 PM

    Sad ending to a sweet tale! "La vie on rose" - only one way to look at life - a nice way but sometimes heartbreaking. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 4:25:00 PM

    super thoughtful write enjoyed ty Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 12:37:00 AM

    Because we love, we make ourselves vulnerable as well. Well-written, Debbie... David

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 8:47:00 PM

    I do see a beautiful poem here mam :) Thank you for sharing your stories in such a lovely way :) Regards Shiraz

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 5:57:00 PM

    Sad but sometimes that is what happens when we love but not every time..There is always second even third chances..Enjoyed reading your work ...Sara

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 2:16:00 PM

    Even if it's one-sided, love still can be real. This was powerful & I can deeply relate to this.

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 12:01:00 PM

    Debbie, the way you wind the words around with elegance toward the heartfelt ending. Your gift with the pen is stunning. Pitch Perfect title and poem :)

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 10:12:00 AM

    It's remarkable that the brain is wired in such a way that these impressions stay with us for decades if not until we leave everything behind. Thank you for letting me know that I am not alone. Your work always seems passionate and real.

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 9:57:00 AM

    this is so profound Debbie, and a wonderful poem to read

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 8:43:00 AM

    Lovely, Debbie...We all get bewitched sometimes.....We are only human...clear the stardust from your eyes....The only perfect thing in this the love we carry in our hearts for the ones we adore! Hugs!