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Changing Skies

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Changing Skies

On waking the child runs to the window
will it still be there she is thinking?
there in the sky replacing the sun
is an orb so fantastical that reflects

Prisms of colour are flooding out
the sky changing as the orb
like a disco ball shatters
distorting and reflecting

Sometimes a polka dot
then some stripes
wavy lines of colour
triangles tumbling

The child stared in wonder
if she lived to a hundred
she would never forget
the day of the changing skies

contest: changing skies written 06/22/2013

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  1. Date: 7/17/2013 11:04:00 PM
    Lovely piece my dear.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 7/18/2013 12:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    dear M.M Ty so much love Shadow xox smiles
  1. Date: 6/25/2013 11:53:00 PM
    beautiful.....:):):):)Adarsh

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/26/2013 8:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ty Adarsh for your time reading my work Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 6/21/2013 11:23:00 PM
    Lovely write Shadow ... Seren

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 11:21:00 PM
    Excellent. Well pened. Enjoyed. Tfs