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Red Sun

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Below is the poem entitled Red Sun which was written by poet Richard Lamoureux. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Red Sun

red sun glows in the distance
as yellow clouds form halo
stretching eyes along the path
that the sun travels

Red Sun Contest
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  1. Date: 7/10/2013 1:57:00 PM
    feels very Japanese....

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 9:59:00 AM
    I could see the beauty....:):):):)Adarsh.....

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 6:57:00 PM
    Well done, Richard. I wish you well.... Jake

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 2:06:00 AM
    Aye poet friend. Good luck in the contest. AO

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 12:10:00 PM
    Very nice poem.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 6/23/2013 12:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Matthew
  1. Date: 6/23/2013 10:22:00 AM
    oh you are sure the master of visual poetry,, and this is no exception....

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 6/23/2013 12:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Your the greatest Harry, good for my ego;0)
  1. Date: 6/23/2013 4:25:00 AM
    hmmm... wonderful,..

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 6/23/2013 6:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Elai
  1. Date: 6/22/2013 12:49:00 PM
    Awesome Richard.....:-)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 6/22/2013 1:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Donna, hugs Rick
  1. Date: 6/22/2013 9:56:00 AM
    I'm sure this one will shine like the rays of the sun. Halo...Love that word. Beyonce's Halo is one of my fav songs. My favorite lines... "Hit me like a ray of sun Burning through my darkest night You're the only one that I want Think I'm addicted to your light." The concept of sun and light have always been important to me, and I have many poems on this theme. This is a great write. Good luck.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 6/22/2013 1:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Me too...If I'm in the pool...I never get out! Handstands and all....If I'm in the sea...same story... I love the sea....I love the water....I was once called a dolphin...Perhaps now i resemble another aquatic mammal, but....graceful none the less. ;) I'm in my element when I'm in the water!
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 6/22/2013 1:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I can totally understand. For me it is sun and water
  1. Date: 6/21/2013 9:01:00 PM
    Hello Richard, thank you for the lovely comment you left on my poem. --- this is a very lovely entry for Russell's contest. a nice traveling ray, love the horizon once it hits my view. good luck in the contest... hugs' :-) LUV~ LINDA

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 6/21/2013 10:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You are welcome Linda
  1. Date: 6/21/2013 7:32:00 PM
    hey, this one is very interesting, Focus on our eyes following it. Good job!!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 6/21/2013 10:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Andrea