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Her brittle hands

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Her brittle hands

Another layer of lavender scented lotion
Rubbed in vehement laughter

A quelling of sadness
Covered up in mascara insanity
Livid strokes of feathered paintbrushes

Hoping to see the big picture

She cried like oil paintings without a purpose.

A treasure hunter searching for rubbery remedies
Without heart’s sanctified atrium
To light the way

She bled from carnivorous pores
Bites against feeding palms
Struggling licks upon pacifier wounds

Mouth
Shut

Stone’s lonely lyric
Thrown against fragile lighthouses
Beaming through unacceptable horizons

Investigation of deity’s hidden agenda,
She questions validation’s esophagus

Its vocal chords
Torn

Another squeeze from lavender bottle
Empty
Its exhales shedding infantile whisper

…

A bounced reality check
Declaring that it wasn’t a disease
That afflicted her bones

©Drake J. Eszes

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  1. Date: 11/9/2013 6:17:00 PM
    Nope Nette didn't send me out. I have enjoyed reading this one again Drake. Her brittle hands grabbed me once again.

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 1:57:00 AM
    This is such a powerful write! Brilliant work!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 9/24/2013 7:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much, Bindu! =D
  1. Date: 8/25/2013 4:26:00 PM
    Lavender again....Hmmmmmm...you are taken with this color. I am too. My favorite! :) I just wanted to pass by to say hi...been...a little CRAZY lately, but hey...that's my life. Hope all is well with you. Read this again...One day...when I visit Cali, you are going to go through this LINE BY LINE! ;)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/25/2013 4:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ha. Deal. :) Thank you so much, Eileen.
  1. Date: 7/11/2013 9:39:00 PM
    Oh, Drake.....it takes a lot to make me speechless but you done it. Amazing poem.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 7/12/2013 12:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    WOO HOO! Mission accomplished! Making poets speechless isn't an easy thing to do. :) I'm glad you stopped by here! That means a lot!
  1. Date: 7/11/2013 5:05:00 PM
    All the paint in the world will not hide the pain beneath the surface. Well written! Betty

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 7/11/2013 5:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Precisely! You got it. :) Thanks so much! Nice to see you here, Betty.
  1. Date: 7/10/2013 1:27:00 PM
    She cried like oil paintings without a purpose. Looks like someone already has given you praise for this fine line of poetry--but I will concur. The interest to me is the body beneath the hands...this piece would be enriched as a two part...give one part to the other body in the story....could be lover, could be her baby...well done, Drake.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 7/10/2013 2:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Indeed! Interesting take on that. Hmm. :) Thanks so much, Victoria!
  1. Date: 6/28/2013 5:57:00 PM
    Drake, You wind the theme with impeccable verse... "She cried like oil paintings without a purpose"... brilliance

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 6/28/2013 10:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many, many thanks to you, Karen! :)
  1. Date: 6/26/2013 12:06:00 AM
    Such a unique style you have. Another great one. I dunno if you know who Justin Bordner is, but I think you may like his poetry(he's on the soup). Anyhow, it was just a thought. Deep, gripping words in every verse. Loved! Always, Laura

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 6/28/2013 10:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi, Laura! :) Thank you very much! I do know who Justin is. He's quite good. Thank you again for coming by here!
  1. Date: 6/25/2013 9:30:00 AM
    Ow Drake that mascara can t always hide the sadness..the pain..At a time in life its going to smudge all over..and tears will flow like the cry from oil paintings without a purpose.Outstanding..you are awesome

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 6/25/2013 9:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) No, YOU are awesome!!! Terrific analysis! :) Thank you so much, Charmaine!
  1. Date: 6/25/2013 9:20:00 AM
    My newest fave poem, Drake.. thanks for sharing this beautiful lines..

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 6/25/2013 9:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi, Shirley!!!! You're ok! :) Awesome! Thank you so much for your sweet words!
  1. Date: 6/24/2013 7:28:00 PM
    Another squeeze from an empty bottle,exhales infantile whisper ...sad...deep...the whole poem Drake...love your take on things and life

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 6/24/2013 8:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi & thank you so much, Donna. :) I do what I can.
  1. Date: 6/24/2013 6:17:00 PM
    Your so deep, it's like taking a dip in a warm pool of thoughts, enjoyed xxx

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 6/24/2013 6:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dive gently or belly flop wildly, up to you. =) Thank you so much, Rose!
  1. Date: 6/24/2013 12:20:00 PM
    enjoyed your radio show, drake..:) huggs

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 6/24/2013 12:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Awesome! :) Thank you!
  1. Date: 6/24/2013 11:23:00 AM
    My absolute favourite of yours so far!!! There is so much going on in this one - so much to think about and interpret, which is what I love about poetry. I would love to hear you read this one on your show!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 6/24/2013 11:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi, Heather!!! Perhaps I will read it. I think I may do another show next week. I'll let you all know on my blog. I aim to get those to think as best I can. Thanks so much! :)
  1. Date: 6/24/2013 12:45:00 AM
    The inner pain at the centre of our being cannot be covered-up by external embellishment. Well-written piece of work, Drake... David

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 6/24/2013 7:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Spot on analysis, David. Thank you so much for coming by here! :)
  1. Date: 6/23/2013 6:42:00 PM
    Dropped by looking for a new poem also to say hello. One out of two ain't bad.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 6/23/2013 8:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ha! Hi Richard! Did Nette set you out to do this? :) Thanks so much!!! You're awesome!
  1. Date: 6/23/2013 2:04:00 PM
    hello darke, your fingers need a new write... looking forward!..:) huggs

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 6/23/2013 2:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You called me Darke, HA! :) I'll have something new soon enough. ;)
  1. Date: 6/23/2013 10:43:00 AM
    Very moving write !!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 6/23/2013 10:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi & thank you, Debra! :)
  1. Date: 6/23/2013 4:32:00 AM
    My gash Drake u have given a talented hand, writing this kind of piece makes my mouth to shut! LOL ur amazing,,, U R!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 6/23/2013 7:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL well I don't wanna do that! I want to hear you speak! Or type, whichever. :) Thanks so much, Elai!!
  1. Date: 6/22/2013 7:55:00 PM
    You almost write beyond the boundaries of my comprehension. That is really no difficult task. But, my friend, One thing I do understand is the artist that lives in you. Keep writing and I will continue to read and pick up enough to appreciate your craft.... Deepest respect.....Jake

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 6/22/2013 8:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    There aren't enough words to express my gratitude for this kind of comment, John. For now, thank you so much for that. Truly.
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