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GOD himself

light has always reminding me about truths...
hope z always dere in my heart...
makin my own destiny lyk sm odrs..
n a man who z god himself n my world impart..
 
a man who forgives my mistakes..
a man who gives me a protective delf..
a man who selflesly allocates..
a man who z god himself..
 
nthin cn break his promises..
a surity which cn be seen in his face..
nthin cn touch his goal n tame it..
becoz he hs faith on me n it wl brace..
 
smone who dnt take wrong decisions..
becoz things breakdown if u dnt care of a shelf..
smone who wnts to c odrs hapynes..
becoz he know the priority of god himself..
 
love pari

if u liked d poem or evn if u hate it..plz gv me ur feedback through ur cmnts..i wl apreciate it..

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  1. Date: 11/20/2013 2:47:00 PM
    Despite lack of English language skills you still manage to be eloquent with your message and imagery.

    SINGH Avatar PARIVARTANA SINGH
    Date: 11/28/2013 2:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yeah...I'm wrkin on my english skils...fingr crosd. :)
  1. Date: 6/22/2013 4:53:00 AM
    Very unique but so filled with beautifully woven words. Yours expressions are pure and elegant and I will keep on reading your poems..feels great.

    SINGH Avatar PARIVARTANA SINGH
    Date: 6/22/2013 5:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thnx a lot sean.. thnx for givin me ur fedbck...u cn chck out mine odrs too :) :)
  1. Date: 6/22/2013 4:23:00 AM
    I liked the poem I didn't like the way you spelled certain letters maybe you wanted to be different if that's the case don't be your writing doesn't need it. Great poem poet. Very beautiful

    SINGH Avatar PARIVARTANA SINGH
    Date: 6/22/2013 5:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thnx a lot sean.. thnx for givin me ur fedbck...u cn chck out mine odrs too :) :)
  1. Date: 6/22/2013 12:39:00 AM
    Very nice poem! I love the first line, very deep Keep writing..... Hakim

    SINGH Avatar PARIVARTANA SINGH
    Date: 6/22/2013 1:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thnx hakim...u cn chck out odrs too if u wnt...thnx for ur feedbck..:)
  1. Date: 6/21/2013 2:47:00 AM
    - A beautiful poem, written with loving words and consideration. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    SINGH Avatar PARIVARTANA SINGH
    Date: 6/21/2013 2:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thnx anne...hope dt god wl listn to me.. :P :P
  1. Date: 6/21/2013 2:41:00 AM
    Interesting way of dealing with the concept.Its a beautiful piece keep writing Lots of love - Shiraz

    SINGH Avatar PARIVARTANA SINGH
    Date: 6/21/2013 2:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thnx shiraz....keep postin :) :)