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ANGEL'S TOUCH

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Below is the poem entitled ANGEL'S TOUCH which was written by poet Olive Eloisa Guillermo. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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ANGEL'S TOUCH

            Did you ever stop to think,
     What this angel's touch really mean?

       Smiling at you at a flower's blush
    Giving you the time to think and hush
      When you wanted a melody to hear
      She sang you a song in joyous tears

   When you badly needed determination;
      She is ready to give you inspiration
  When only a joke could make you smile; 
      She flashed it to you in shortest mile

      When you wanted a game to play;
          She partnered with you in gay
  When only an hour you swore to spend; 
   She wants to be with you until the end

 When strings of thorns are poured upon you; 
    With arms wide open, she welcomed you
       She comforted and gave you might
     All these all she did with heartfelt delight

                            Now, 
                        I ask you...
   Have you ever felt the touch of an angel?

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***my first ever poem @ fifth grade elementary.. :D?

re-edited today:
olive_eloi
03/20/2014
2:39am

for the contest: POEMS ENDING WITH A QUESTION
SPONSOR: NATHAN A.
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  1. Date: 6/23/2014 6:11:00 PM

    Hey girl, Wow what wise words from a fifth grade you, and you have kept growing and getting real good, I am glad to read you poetry you are a ray of sunshine on a cloudy day, you brighten up my world girl :) :)

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo Date: 6/24/2014 5:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much Casarah,.. :0 I appreciate your continuous support to me.. :)
  1. Date: 5/28/2014 7:24:00 PM

    haha, you know why I am here... Olive, thank you for the comment on my comment...Linda

  1. Date: 5/27/2014 6:55:00 PM

    Hi Olive, are you going back in time...LOL... I got a notification from this poem... Hugs...Linda

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo Date: 5/28/2014 4:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hahaha yes LInda.. :) thanks really. :)
  1. Date: 5/10/2014 1:56:00 PM

    Hi Olive, Here I am right at the start and I find a little gem. It Is amazing the little gems you find when going back, or at least I've found this. Let us go right to the question, yes I have felt an Angel touch a few times. When I was born, through a mothers touch throughout my life, and through a Love's touch. This piece flows along nicely and the rhyming Keepd up to a high standard. Your piece holds the attention from start to finish. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always.MIKE

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo Date: 5/27/2014 1:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Weee.. Thanks much for the drop by Michael.. :D
  1. Date: 4/17/2014 10:45:00 AM

    Wow, unbelievable, that's very very very good!! I said I will read some of your earlier ones, but that's really early!!!! :)

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo Date: 4/17/2014 3:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) thanks for the great comment Arthur.. :) hahha yes.. :) got a lot at home.. :) since I was in my early years lool.. though am still you though. :P really appreciate it. :) _ olive_eloi :)
  1. Date: 6/23/2013 2:40:00 PM

    Your word flow is quite unique. Some intense questions are presented here. A very, very good ending. You do well with keeping the reader on edge, so to speak. :) Great job!

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo Date: 5/27/2014 1:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks much Drake.. :) really appreciate your comment.. :) though this is sososoosoosososo late thank you.. :( GBU and let it be known that you are one of my inspirations since I joined here.. :)
  1. Date: 6/22/2013 11:58:00 AM

    Olive, , "Welcome to the poetry soup. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest -- I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer on this site. Please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Hoping to become a follower and a friend to your poems, and your persona. Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo Date: 5/27/2014 1:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much sweet LInda.. :) I realy appreciate your drop by..:) You have been my inspiration then.. :)
  1. Date: 6/21/2013 8:39:00 AM

    I like your poem Olive, great ending question... good luck in the angel contest. , Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo Date: 5/27/2014 1:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Skat.. :) really appreciate your welcome.. :) though this maybe late but i really thank you.. :) as like Drake you and LInda has been my first ever inspiration here.. :)