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Alone

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Alone

Clouds of gray shade my day
No heat in a hot summer ray
My rainy day is here to stay
Cold as the snow when it blows
I should say!
Loneliness remains in my head
My heart withers as if it was dead
Body is num
No senses for I cannot feel none
My soul relentlessly searching for someone
To stop the bullet coming out of this gun!
RP

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  1. Date: 11/14/2013 9:44:00 PM
    RP wow...just wow

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    Date: 11/17/2013 4:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you F.J!!
  1. Date: 10/31/2013 8:22:00 AM
    I'm glad this was for dramatic effect. Strange how we can feel all alone when God is all around us. In reality we can welcome us in side of us where he can begin to fill all those holes in our hearts.

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    Date: 11/6/2013 5:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You are absolutely right Richard!
  1. Date: 6/27/2013 8:03:00 AM
    You have quite a few fans now Hakim....I love how i feel as though I can perform your work. I'm about to post a new poem in a couple of days or so. We shall see. Good looking out..always good to see you stop by my friend.,,Keep burning

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    Date: 6/27/2013 3:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Ink, Thanks for the love Bro! I fell the same way about your poems, like you said before great minds think alike.... I am looking forward to reciting your new material, peace. Hakim
  1. Date: 6/23/2013 9:12:00 PM
    Hello Hakim, thank you for stopping in on my poems today. I will be back tomorrow to spy on your work... oops ! I meant I will be back to see if you have a new poem :-) .... luv~ LINDA

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    Date: 6/24/2013 7:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Linda, I am flattered that you would spy on my work.... wait! I mean that you are a fan of my work... ; ) ...... Truth be told, I'm one of your biggest fans!! Thanks for the love!
  1. Date: 6/22/2013 11:26:00 AM
    Hakim, today my clouds carry some shade... you described the occasion of alone, the way it should be. however, no one should ever have to aim a gun to this feeling... hope this is only a poem, and not something you are going through right now... luv~ LINDA

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    Date: 6/22/2013 10:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey linda, Thank you for your concern but thank God I value my life too much to do something like that. I do however have a taste for the dramatic when I'm proving a point, In this case It was just for the poem.... : )
  1. Date: 6/22/2013 4:55:00 AM
    Soul relentlessly searching for someone........... Love the way you end it.Great way of dealing with the topic..... Lots of love-Shiraz

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    Date: 6/22/2013 10:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I appreciate the feedback Shiraz, Thank you!
  1. Date: 6/22/2013 1:36:00 AM
    wow..its too good..keep writin.. :)

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    Date: 6/22/2013 10:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you!
  1. Date: 6/20/2013 11:01:00 PM
    Hi Hakim, Your poem speaks of loneliness and what it can do to the mind, we feel depressed but somethimes being alone can be uplifting as it can take you away from your everyday problems so in a way it depends on the circumstances and how we feel through them, a gloomy poem well written and sometimes very true in life. John

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    Date: 6/22/2013 12:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you John