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SKIES FULL OF WONDERS

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SKIES FULL OF WONDERS

written 9th June 2013



See the sight of a full moon in the dark of night
 if done just right, it's a magical sight

Watch, as the sun descend's off the edge of the earth
 it's flame's extinguish, as if by the ocean's thirst

Look deep, into the sky at night
 you'll be "surprised by your delight

All of the heavens glory
 will return again, the next morning

So send a wish, upon your favourite star
 you'll never guess that your wish, went so far

So at the end of every busy daylight
 breathe in the gift, of heaven's blissful night 

I guarantee, it'll help you sleep peaceful and right
 well, into his new mornings delight

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  1. Date: 6/20/2013 10:16:00 PM

    Denise, I think you did a good job with your poem, you have an innocence to your writing, dare to take chances, be bold, use metaphors and overallhave fun with it. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 7:40:00 AM

    Good rhymes, but you can do much better by improving your vocabulary and chosing words less trivial. It is not a must but may help to write better poems. I tell this to encourage your genuine leaning for poetry. Some words are mispelled as often occurs also to me. Here "guarantee" and "upon" instead of "garentee" and "apon"