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Love Lessons From Lorna

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Love Lessons From Lorna

I read the tale of Lorna Doone
And to my heart it was a boon
Such steadfast love makes me to swoon
But YOUR love ends too soon, too soon….

To trust that love does persevere
And conquers every ghastly fear
To h'ven itself it draws one near
But YOUR love brings a tear, a tear

Me thinks such love cannot be real
Though oft its burning I do feel
My tiny heart with it does reel
But YOUR love has no zeal, no zeal

Dear John and Lorna faced their foes
Their story with great beauty glows
And heaven only such love knows
But MY love for you just grows….
                              	      It shows……
		 		               It flows……
Yes, my love for you just flows.

Eileen Manassian Ghali


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  1. Date: 6/21/2013 8:02:00 AM

    Yes, the greatest simple pleasure of them all. Excellent!

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 7:51:00 PM

    Just a quick note to let you know you're appreciated. Thanks for all your kindness over the last few days. You are a sweetheart.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 6/21/2013 1:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Awwww....thanks, Richard. I appreciate hearing from you. I like to help whenever I can....saying I'm a sweetheart is reward enough. :)
  1. Date: 6/20/2013 10:27:00 AM

    your classic poetry blends well with this classic saga, amazing poetry Eileen...

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 6/21/2013 1:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) I'm beaming, Harry...simply beaming. Thanks!!!!!
  1. Date: 6/20/2013 8:50:00 AM

    I haven't read the book but the poem certainly is spectacular,

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 6/21/2013 1:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    What an adjective...blow me away. Spectacular, eh? Thank you, Richard! :)
  1. Date: 6/20/2013 5:17:00 AM

    WOW. That book certainly inspired an amazing poem here Eileen, slow burning heart melter if ever there was one. I love it. Take care, Richard

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 6/20/2013 5:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, RIchard. I know you've read it. It is very good! My Mama dearest was right to love it so. :( I miss her....thanks for the post, Richard. Always good to hear from you!