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Above The Clouds

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Above The Clouds

I reverie to rise above the clouds,
where eagles soar great mountain high.
To peer upon the large cold city crowds,  
where the befallen angels calmly lie. 

Turmoil and darkness traps the crowds below,
vile deeds draw quick my sadness out to cry.
Not knowing who is friendly or a foe,
where the befallen angels calmly lie. 

When all is done and I shall turn to rest, 
vile deeds draw quick my sadness out to cry.
And heavenly blue skies will last attest,
where the befallen angels calmly lie. 

I reverie to rise above the clouds,
where the befallen angels calmly lie. 

Copyright © 2013  By Caryl S. Muzzey

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  1. Date: 8/7/2013 7:00:00 AM
    I reverie to rise above the clouds,------ where eagles in skies soar great mountain high.------ To peer upon the large cold city crowds,------- where the befallen angels calmly lie.------- Turmoil and darkness traps the crowds below,-------- vile deeds draw quick my sadness out to cry.------- not knowing who is friendly or a foe,------ where the befallen angels calmly lie.------- When all is done and I shall turn to rest,-------- vile deeds draw quick my sadness out to cry.-------- And heavenly blue skies will last attest,-------- where the befallen angels calmly lie.------- I reverie to rise above the clouds,----------- where the befallen angels calmly lie.

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 10:26:00 PM
    a sweet above the clouds poem........... SKAT

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 9:47:00 PM
    Caryl, CONGRATULATIONS! on your awesome win, in the "Above the Clouds" a contest by Drake Eszes. have yourself a nice one... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 7:12:00 PM
    You certainly rose to the challenge. Lovely piece. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 2:40:00 PM
    This was a very hard hitting piece, Caryl. The enormity of these lines had me gripped! Excellent! And thank you for submitting this to my contest! :)

    Muzzey Avatar Caryl Muzzey
    Date: 6/25/2013 2:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for sponsoring a wonderful topic Drake, I enjoyed the challenge.