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At the Pawnshop

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At the Pawnshop

I walk in, It almost feels cold
Letting go to all the unknown
That ring you got me a promise we didn’t keep
 a frame of  a picture of us
You didn’t stay out long enough for me to need
The key to the house
That we couldn’t afford to love
And here are my mom tears that I couldn’t afford to give up 
Then last are the broken promise that were made to keep
I lost a friend, a dad, a house, and maybe me
But you can have it all whatever you need
I’m looking for something that was taken from us
Please pawnshop I’m begging it’s a must
He is ours for us to keep…tell God he belongs to me
He’s too young to be up there
Please …just tell me if you find him anywhere 


In dedication of ended relationship, a father who is always in jail, a family home we lost and lastly my 17-year cousin who was take from us to soon
Rip Bebo

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  1. Date: 7/9/2013 9:53:00 AM

    A very sad tale captured with respectful words. Congrats on your winning poem.

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 7:29:00 AM

    Tania a wonderful and heartfelt poem. Congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 12:49:00 AM

    ha I love it .... congrats all the way :-) ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 10:35:00 PM

    This takes several; readings to absorb all of the emotion. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 4:31:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win. This is a sad story.

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 3:15:00 PM

    Taina, , a might fun theme... congratulations in the pawn shop contest...xox~ LINDA