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alone revised - Contest

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alone revised - Contest

I smell the fragrance 
of your body close to mine 
the flower of my love 
now you are alone 
for one last journey 

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  1. Date: 6/29/2013 5:17:00 AM
    I think this is wonderful as well, but sad. Keep up thegreat writing, I will catch back up one of these days.

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 5:54:00 PM
    This is a very beautiful poem! Its so good I almost thought I wrote it!!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 6/24/2013 6:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    haha dont try and claim it , it got a N/A ...Seren
  1. Date: 6/19/2013 8:07:00 PM
    This is a spectacular and tremendous write my friend! I am in complete awe by the splendor of this incredible poem! I really enjoyed reading this delightful piece this evening! What a magnificent poem, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 6/24/2013 6:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thx Russell ...Seren
  1. Date: 6/19/2013 4:11:00 PM
    Reads like a winner for the contest..Good luck in the contests..Thanks for the consoling words on Gail's blog..Sara

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 6/24/2013 6:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    No not this time Sara ...Seren