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  1. Date: 7/8/2013 6:32:00 AM
    You portray well being in hospital blessing to you and your mum great pen

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 3:05:00 PM
    Glad to know your mother is ok! I like the thought of a noise poem. very nice!! -Heather

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 8:36:00 PM
    Donna, i never enjoyed any trip to the ER... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 6:51:00 PM
    I'm happy to hear you mom is doing okay. I certainly can relate to these sounds, two spinal surgeries since January and the end of July i'll have a 3rd one, hoping it will be my last. Thanks for Sharing. Best wishes for your mom's recovery. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 4:30:00 PM
    Hi Donna; I know those sounds very well. I am glad that your Mom is alright now. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 9:50:00 AM
    These can be very eerie places, as you describe all hussle and bussle then nothing, You certainly made the atmosphere and sounds real in this write Donna. Very pleased your mom recovered. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 10:06:00 AM
    wow real life poetry, does not get any better...

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/20/2013 2:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks sad to hear the screams among these sounds of family members who loose loved ones...trauma er is not a good place to be...
  1. Date: 6/19/2013 7:10:00 PM
    This is a very insightful and grandiose write my friend! I truly loved reading this significant poem this evening! What a powerful piece you have written! Great Work!!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/20/2013 2:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Appreciate you reading and kind words Russell...