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Lunenburg

We stroll the wharf by morning dew
and watch the tall ships passing through
as sunrise paints the ocean blue 
in golden hue, in golden hue.
 
We wander down toward the shore,
to bask in mist while we explore
the crescent beach, the ocean floor 
as seagulls soar, as seagulls soar.
 
We roam the township's cheerful streets,
past rainbow homes and bandstand beats.
Then in the shops, we snack on treats
and rest our feet, and rest our feet.
 
The sun deserts us all too soon
to make room for the silver moon,
and all the while, the ocean's tunes
enchant the dunes, enchant the dunes.


For Kim's "Monotetra" contest

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  1. Date: 7/10/2013 8:32:00 PM
    Beautiful and seren, Heather! Congratulations on a well deserved win!

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 8:05:00 AM
    This is fantastic Heather, loved it, congratulations.

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 9:35:00 PM
    Congrats In Kim's "Monotetra" contest....take care...LINDA

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 2:43:00 PM
    This poem is so full of gentle motion and brilliant colours! I find myself particularly drawn to your closing verse. What a perfect way to end a poem like this! Another poem from the queen, and that says it all!

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 11:39:00 AM
    What a lovely way to spend the day. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 11:26:00 AM
    Heather, congrats on your win with this lovely write! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 11:20:00 AM
    Very romantic! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 9:21:00 AM
    Reads as if you are describing any number of towns along the New Jersey Shore. Good descriptiveness and rhyming

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 3:21:00 PM
    Yours turned out really good. And you chose a topic that is so lovely. I hope I can do as well when I try this one.

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 7:01:00 AM
    Ok! I like it a lot. Very good Iambic tetrameter, which you should add as a comment in the "about this poem" section, above it. Before writing in there, click on HTML text and then add your comment. Lovely verse Heather.

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 3:00:00 PM
    very good monorhyme....best wishes

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 9:54:00 AM
    if ever a poem needed music this wonder does, an instant number one here, just love this..

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 7:32:00 AM
    What a ride! I loved this. Sun & moon, undeniable beauty. Excellent job!

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 7:14:00 AM
    Beautifully done Heather, I love the rhyming scheme on this, if you don't mind I'll use yours as an example and I'll attempt one later one, Thank you for being a sweet teach and sharing this excellent write, love, xxxv xxx