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senryu and a thought

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senryu and a thought

Senryu
Witness a star die
A sparkle across night sky 
A shroud of nebulous 


Thought

Surveillance society 
The obedient has nothing to fear
….For now.


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  1. Date: 7/6/2013 11:08:00 PM

    jan, a wonderful haiku * thank you for sharing. Linda

    hansen Avatar jan oskar hansen Date: 7/7/2013 5:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Poet Destroyer
  1. Date: 6/20/2013 5:19:00 AM

    Hi - That word "obedient" gives me the willies. love Katrhy

    hansen Avatar jan oskar hansen Date: 6/20/2013 2:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    obedient thank youdear
  1. Date: 6/19/2013 7:34:00 AM

    Quite true! Especially your "thought"...nicely done!

    hansen Avatar jan oskar hansen Date: 6/19/2013 5:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Drake Eszes