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A Child's Peace

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A Child's Peace

Tell me of your peace. 
Let it tell your story now
Of trials and tribulations, a tale not of dreams
Weary from a journey of self-discovery
My child, know the comfort in your peace
You feel hope in this familiar place 
As it gently sloughs the pain away 
Tell me of your peace 
In which we all are blessed and free
Search throughout your soul sweet child
Peer not within your cluttered mind 
Look out to rest your tired eyes but do not let them see
Solace found strewn upon daily thoughts is fleeting at it's best
Lasting merely moments, in untouched souls a true peace 
Oh yes! You'll know when you arrive but only you will know 
The world will melt away as a candle left under the blazing sun
Away away, until you feel home again, an unguided familiar scene
An innocence once lost is restored, all sins suddenly forgiven
Soaking this in with relucant ease, 
Breathe it deep with a slow release
Take it in, delight in details you discover
Be calm here child, please have no fear, I am here 
You are safe in this place of yours, no hurt no tears
We share not the same peace, no no
Unique to each of us, yet stranger to none
Trust in more than what you see, know beauty is within reach
We share this unspoken bond of freedom from ourselves
Please young one, listen closer now 
I say, leave it all behind you love, it will only weigh you down
Cleanse yourself of careless words and careful lies 
I know you're weary, let go of all you carry
Don't be afraid, here you are burden free 
Trust in you, blessed one, it's easier than you believe
Sweet child, tell me now if you see
Peace resting deep within 
Waiting for you
For you to let it be

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  1. Date: 6/19/2013 4:30:00 PM
    This poem is absolutely beautiful! Wow! Each line is pure and elegant! I'll also rate you a 7 for your awesome effort! Keep on writing and posting your genius work!! x) Welcome to this poetry website! I'm gonna read this poem again some time soon! For now, you're my fav poet! I'm looking forward to reading more of your work! This poem is priceless and a unique one! Have yourself a wonderful week! Sincerely, D.W. Breidenthal ^...^

    Charisse Avatar Gabrielle Charisse
    Date: 6/19/2013 5:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, I am very humbled by your praise. Hope you have a great week as well. Gabrielle
  1. Date: 6/19/2013 9:05:00 AM
    This is such a vehement piece that it strikes on the heart strings.Welcome to poetrysoup dear one.

    Charisse Avatar Gabrielle Charisse
    Date: 6/19/2013 5:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am glad to hear it has a strong effect on someone else besides myself. Thank you for the feedback! Gabrielle
  1. Date: 6/19/2013 8:11:00 AM
    A deep and powerful piece, well written. Welcome to Poetry Soup, I think you'll do well here. It's a 7 out of 7 rating from me. :)

    Charisse Avatar Gabrielle Charisse
    Date: 6/19/2013 8:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Gary!! That's very kind. Hopefully I'll be able to post more soon. Gabrielle
  1. Date: 6/19/2013 7:39:00 AM
    Powerful w/a touch of saddening pain. Tremendous lines, Gabrielle!

    Charisse Avatar Gabrielle Charisse
    Date: 6/19/2013 8:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Drake. I wrote it for my oldest daughter who is struggling with the loss of her father. Tough write but well worth it.