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Blue Eyes

The rain patters down
Sending goose bumps across flesh
My blue lips are numb

Her azure eyes shine
Like crystals catching the sun
Even in this rain

 My hide is soaked
It is on the line for her
The cold bite goes numb

Drawn in my jacket
Her eyes beaming at me
Blue eyed paradise. 

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  1. Date: 7/4/2013 12:19:00 AM
    "tremendously awesome........... congrats!!! SKAT"

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 8:46:00 AM
    Lovely poem. Congrats on your win

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 2:46:00 AM
    - Well written haiku, Zach ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)