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cold breath

Just to 
catch you 
in time,I 
fall.I fall far 
belowinto 
invisible 
walls,my 
strength 
fails me,asI 
tumble far 
down,in 
the hope 
of catching 
you in my 
arms,the 
icy winds 
toss you 
by,you 
flutter like 
a leaf 
falling 
from the 
sky,I 
swoop 
down and 
hold you 
gently as 
we begin 
the 
ascend.My 
wings 
flutter 
faster and 
faster,your 
breath is 
cold 
against my 
face,as we 
fly 
higher,the 
clouds 
pass us 
by.The 
bluish sky 
is our 
abode,I 
wait for 
you to 
open your 
eyes,your 
heartbeat 
picks 
up,your 
breath 
turns 
warm,your 
eyes 
open,as 
you smile 
warmly.

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  1. Date: 5/25/2014 2:18:00 AM
    Marvelous first post.

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 11:08:00 AM
    † Smile, As I Smile Warmly Gaze Into Your Beautiful Oceans Eyes Pull You Close And Kiss Your Perfumed Lips. The Breath Of Life ˜ Wonderful, Feature And Congratulations. Love, John

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 1:53:00 PM
    Hi P B M., I like your poem, and am smiling after reading your poem. Thanks for the awesome read. . Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your pen is looking for. If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 8:08:00 AM
    Priyanka, wow... love your free verse style. a nice feeling when reading your poem. thanks for your awesome first poem., Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

    mullick Avatar priyanka bernadette mullick
    Date: 6/19/2013 11:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks skat . I would like you to be my facebook friend . Your poems are extremely good too. Please do contact me through facebook. god bless.... PRANKS.
  1. Date: 6/19/2013 5:16:00 AM
    Hey! - Pleased to read your first poem in the P-Soup! - You write very well. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and words here with us :) - Here it is: give to get, comments - then you will get feedback on your writing - I love get feedback on what I write. - Wish you luck my "new friend" - Have fun with poetry! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    mullick Avatar priyanka bernadette mullick
    Date: 6/19/2013 5:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK U SO MUCH ANNE .IT MEANS A LOT.LOVED UR POEM ''FEELINGS''.IT'S AWSOME!
  1. Date: 6/19/2013 12:10:00 AM
    Very nicely written and arranged, I enjoyed very much Peter

    mullick Avatar priyanka bernadette mullick
    Date: 6/19/2013 5:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANKS PETER!