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while we were together 
you always had a problem 
but the others had no problem 
so the real problem is you
now i feel special 
i finally feel like i'm loved 
someone is crazy about me 
while you just played the fool
you can no longer place your wrongs on me 
so please don't even try 
i am no longer your play toy 
so i don't need to live 
live of your lies 
i tried so hard to please you 
but you couldn't understand 
even now you are still foolish 
someone needs to give you a hand 
you need to wake up from your dreams 
stop your lies 
before i get mean
one day you will finally see it 
 but by then it is too late 
your will never get your spot back 
cause i'm not lame 
so parade around with your new girlfriend 
stay there laughing at me 
but this comedian is going places 
without you 
is better i see

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  1. Date: 6/18/2013 9:12:00 AM

    yes, let him parade, and you stomp on he'll come chasing and you can parade next lol, enjoyed your write ~always, Linda

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 4:06:00 AM

    We always rise above. Welcome to the Soup. Rick