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leaving

we say that we love someone
but do we know what it means?
are we really in love?
or setting ourself up for pain?
a guy will say he loves you 
but young girl don't know it's lies
hoping for that prince charming 
to finally come your way 
we never really know him 
but notice when he comes 
always wish for better 
but just keep getting worse
until finally we meet him 
that one perfect guy 
but let our past mess things up
cause the pain 
made us can't find our way 
but living in the past is painful
we need to let it go
cause this good guy you have now 
let's his feelings show 
so do not try to play him 
don't you dare break his heart 
love him with your all 
don't let things fall apart 
cause he really loves you 
so try to love him too
don't let who hurt you first 
ruin the love between you two 
guys will say they love you 
not all know what it means
a man will say he loves you 
and do everything 
to make you see

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  1. Date: 6/23/2013 7:25:00 PM

    Very good Gisele. The presence of the past and the fairy tale of prince charming themes worked amazingly to produce good imagery.

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 1:56:00 PM

    Gisele,. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your pen is looking for. If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 8:19:00 AM

    Hi Gisele, that is true i agree with your poem, love the encouraging thoughts. Hope this is for the encouraging contest., Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 5:22:00 AM

    Hey, Gisele! - Pleased to read your first poem in the P-Soup! - You write very well. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and words here with us :) - Here it is: give to get, comments - then you will get feedback on your writing - I love get feedback on what I write. - Wish you luck my "new friend" - Have fun with poetry! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)