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Acoustic Flow

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Acoustic Flow

Gently I strum her
Her melody fills me ear 
For you all to hear

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  1. Date: 6/18/2013 10:47:00 AM
    holding her like a rose........... like a tender melody........... in my heart she lives ............ <--- that's not a full haiku. (i broke the rules) LOL :-) But, i dabbled a little. Many here know I am not much of a haiku poet, to many rules, but I love the fast ans simple ones. How about having haiku fun, on chat one of these days. The soup has a chat room. *luv ~ SKAT ~

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    Date: 6/18/2013 3:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That was pretty good, I appreciate you sharing! Chat room sounds like a lot of fun, I was not aware of that. Thank you for the support..... Much oblige
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    Date: 6/18/2013 10:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    typo, ------- and simple ones
  1. Date: 6/18/2013 10:35:00 AM
    Hello Hakim, your poem is very lovely, you got the concept right. But, your haiku is a senryu, the cousin of the haiku. LOL, that is what I like to call them. The haiku needs the feeling of nature, while the senryu.... reads like your poem above. *luv ~ SKAT ~

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    Date: 6/18/2013 3:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Skat, You are right, thanks for your insight! I appreciate you telling me the difference,This was my first attempt at a Haiku, until now I have only done rhythmic style poems but I am learning other forms and I just love a challenge...! : )
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 5:28:00 PM
    yes, that's what I wanted to see a haiku from you.... Hakim,.... this is sweet, and reeks of good. passion. ..luv....Linda

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    Date: 6/17/2013 5:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you since you asked this is my first one and yes you kind of gave me that nudge I needed, due to the fact that you make it look so easy...LOL