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Greatly Missed

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Greatly Missed

Your were a grand Egyptian queen 
with garments of golden lace in the 
porcelain sands. A part of you makes up
who I am, your smile is now my smile, 
your ways, now my ways. I drank you 
up like fine burgundy but you left 
without a word.

I miss you but it doesn't show.
The hard parts are stiff and broken.
The price I pay for all my pride.
The winds hail and the sun grows hot
and burns gray smoke that surrounds me
and all that is left is sorrow.

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  1. Date: 7/1/2013 10:28:00 AM

    thank you John and SKAT for your kind words

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 11:55:00 AM

    Well done! I really enjoyed reading this one... Congrats on your win.... Jake

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 10:01:00 PM

    congrats -SKAT