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Below is the poem entitled Weather which was written by poet Shadow Hamilton. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Weather

Clouds breeze , wind strong

lightning flashing down in forks

rain flooding the plain

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  1. Date: 7/4/2013 10:36:00 AM

    lovely imagery, SKAT

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 9:28:00 AM

    Very physical description, Linda! Bravo.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 6/18/2013 11:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Giorgio so nice of you to read ty for your encouragement Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 6/18/2013 12:25:00 AM

    You presented the image of a very stormy day on the plains. I enjoyed this.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 6/18/2013 3:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi Andrea warm wet windy days I like I hate cold lol ty for your time Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 6/18/2013 12:12:00 AM

    Very nice, made me feel like I was in that scene, very refreshing Peter

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 6/18/2013 3:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ty Peter I am happy you could visualise it Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 3:30:00 PM

    you must live in the uk, especially poetry this good

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 6/17/2013 3:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes Harry I do lol in the south west ty so much for comment Shadow x
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 2:49:00 PM

    Nice Haiku love the feeling it gave me :)

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 6/17/2013 3:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Kyle ty pleased you enjoyed Shadow x
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 12:45:00 PM

    Hello Shadow, a big impact with the imagery in the weather here... love the haiku. i would love to feel that breeze... always... LINDA

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 6/17/2013 3:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi Linda fanning it your way lol ty for reading Shadow x
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 12:43:00 PM

    Love the imagery you well described. "Lightening coming down in forks" Powerful line here. Hugs and love, Gail

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 6/17/2013 3:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Gail yes like the awesome power of lightening sheet is not as dangerous. ty for stopping in Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 12:17:00 PM

    we've been having heavy afternoon rains and i so relate to the wrath of lighting... your words ignite!.. well done, shadow..:) huggs

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 6/17/2013 3:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nette so kind ty best indoors I like watching lightening tnx for dropping in Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 11:01:00 AM

    wow! Down in forks, Shadow, i love the epic imagery in your haiku. We had scattered rains down here in Texas, about a week ago. No floods, I wish for a small one though. however we can do without the flashing lightning. An excellent haiku. , hope your enjoyed your weekend. take care <3 <3 luv* ~ SKAT ~

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 6/17/2013 3:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi SKAT yes a great one ty was my grandson's 6th birthday we had a party here for him. Hope yours was good too. ty for enjoying Shadow x smile