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PARDON ME WAITER, THERE'S A LESSON IN MY SOUP

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PARDON ME WAITER, THERE'S A LESSON IN MY SOUP


The sensible can be well liked
as such good advice they give,
the sensitive make lasting friends
for their lives are fully lived.

The sensible plan well ahead
but can come across as cold,
the sensitive dance with the wind,
but can seem too bold.

To the sensible I give an ear
while wisdom they impart,
to the sensitive, I give a hug
and offer an open heart. 

the sensible earn my respect,
I love the sensitive to their core,
but those who are merely senseless
I have chosen to ignore.



*LOVE YOU DAD! I HEARD YOU TODAY! PS--- Do they play hockey in Heaven, and, if so, what's the score? From your girl, the dual personality, xoxox





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  1. Date: 12/18/2013 10:39:00 AM

    Sooo do the senseless get poems as on point as these when they read them? hmmm...sensible minds want to know. lol Cyndi I'm not sure why I haven't seen this sooner but I'm glad I've seen it now ;) A beautiful piece you've created!

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 10:46:00 PM

    Very sensible, fun poem Cynthia

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 11:38:00 AM

    This is a poignant write dear Cyndi.Its just the start I need for the day.

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 10:25:00 PM

    hey was this posted on a blog? I think I remember it or at least the idea of it. GREAT poem and thanks for finishing up your contest. haha. It took you long enough (I 'm the same way. But at least you finished it. I think I have entered at least ten contests that NEVER got judged at all)

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 8:01:00 PM

    Deep thoughts from you, quite meaningful, Cyndi, I like it :) Jag

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 12:10:00 AM

    SOUPY!... :)

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 9:02:00 PM

    Good words of wisdom from you.

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 6:51:00 PM

    The teeter totter's up and down, the swing goes to and fro, you my friend are dear to me, I love you don't you know! I have no care vice or virtue, I will care all the same, for a friends a friend through think and thin and never seeks to gain! SMOOCH! Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 2:41:00 PM

    I commented on this beauty in your blog.I just stopped by to tell you that due to error 500 i can t excess soupmail nor blogs momentarily..that is why im leaving you my comment here..Wishing you all the best in the coming weeks and bkessing for your new house.May God bless your new house and you with love peace great neighbours and happiness-hugs Charma

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 11:45:00 AM

    oh my cyn, the integrity found in this piece is astonishing...i am totally blown away by the depth of the content and just everything about this beautiful poem...we care about sensibilities, you know that...the last stanza speaks to me like a roar... hope all is fine with you... will soupy tomorrow.. love and huggs!..:)

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 2:35:00 AM

    its a gentleman way great.Cyndi comment on my poems

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 9:14:00 AM

    Very well stated here!

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 4:38:00 PM

    good sentiments and much truth a fine pen Shadow

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 3:55:00 PM

    I agree wholeheartedly Cyndi !! I liked this very much...love,Deb