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mama's treasure

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mama's treasure

kimo

my mama's beautiful, long, auburn hair 
was piled up high on her head
undone, hung to her waist

tanka

mama's lovely hair
was quite untouched by scissors
daddy loved it long
I wonder if her headaches
came from those heavy tresses

senryu

a beautician wrapped 
my mama's  hair in a bun
for her funeral

6/16/13

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  1. Date: 7/1/2013 10:15:00 PM

    A GOOD WINNING VERSE ................ GOODNIGHT *SKAT

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 7:54:00 PM

    oh MY This is probably one of the most touching ones on the list. I love it, dear. Congrats for your win.

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 2:15:00 PM

    Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 8:35:00 AM

    Beautiful and touching. congrats on your win

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 6:05:00 AM

    its a great write. really love all your poems great. congrats for the win

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 7:15:00 PM

    Touching. Great win. Congrats Gl.

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 7:11:00 PM

    Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 6:56:00 PM

    What memories we keep close to our hearts. This made me choke up a bit. congrats. BG

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 4:06:00 PM

    very lovely, congrats. Rick

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 3:51:00 PM

    Congratulations Joyce, on your deserved win in Constance's contest love. Hugs and love, Gail

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 4:40:00 PM

    Beautifully penned poem for the contest Joyce. Hugs and love, Gail

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 4:18:00 PM

    Hi Joyce; I like this poem. I had an aunt that had her hair very long. My uncle liked it that way. She always had big head aches. Ine day she cut her hair and her head aches were gone. Thanks for sharing....... Lucilla

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 3:34:00 PM

    oh, this is wonderful, joyce!