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  1. Date: 1/16/2014 12:19:00 AM
    Strange. In my previous comment below, I mentioned how it might be better if you add to this standing-alone, couplet....and now I see that you have shortened the two lines into only one. Well, wotever man(lol).

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 8:05:00 PM
    Ruben, a great song from a nature enthusiast.Great imagery.You have used limited words appropriately. (: )Jenish.

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 10:28:00 PM
    how come you are not posting any more?? I have a soupmail for you.

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 5:50:00 PM
    it's very nice.

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 4:08:00 PM
    Heh Ruben where have you been? I see your last poem was written in June, common little Ruby sunshine, give us more if you please xxx

  1. Date: 8/10/2013 6:46:00 PM
    nice couplet ;} I need to read more of yours ;}

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 1:56:00 AM
    hey, need some new ones up!! Soupmail.

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 5:33:00 PM
    This is really nice!

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 8:05:00 PM
    I can see the steam rising, and clouds of dust with each raindrop! (We could use a little on this hot day!!......Let us do a rain dance, please!

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 10:56:00 AM
    loving your summer couplet :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Andrea, contest!!! Take Care *xox* Linda

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 4:55:00 PM
    nice one, ruben! congrats!

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 4:51:00 PM
    this paints a vivid picture, very much like the weather here in the uk at the moment! congrats on your win ruben :)

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 4:43:00 PM
    I can easily picture this in my mind. Great write, Ruben! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 2:48:00 PM
    Oh Mr. O I'd love to splash in puddles with you ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 4:45:00 AM
    beautiful Reuben. Congrats. Rick

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 12:32:00 AM
    : ) Congratulations on a fine win, Ruben! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 6:05:00 PM
    Nicely written, my friend. Well deserving of a win.... Jake

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 3:11:00 PM
    Ruben, ha ha I know this ugly image... and I say ugly cuz, of all the humidity we dread after a rainy day during the summer. . Congratulations in Andrea's steaming hot summer couplet contest... what else could we ask for -the constant reminder of the hottest season that wonders through my Texas Sky. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 1:25:00 PM
    Congrats Ruben on your win!Love this couplet.

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 1:16:00 PM
    You describe perfectly what has just happened where I live. Rain....then sun......and watching the earth drink up as fast as it can!! I love the reality of this one!!