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The Monster Inside

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The Monster Inside

There are darksome days Those storms we all must ride But the greatest storm of all Is the monster tucked inside. It brings out the worst in you When sullen days would creep Its like a raging storm reposing In a gladsome heart so deep. Only in moments to come alive When emotions tough are grind But its hard to tame the fires Of a proud and monstrous mind.

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  1. Date: 9/25/2013 2:20:00 AM
    Absolutely, you caught it all in such powerful words!! Another excellent write, thank you!

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 10:15:00 AM
    YOU BROUGHT THE MONSTER OUT DRAWING BEAUTIFUL PIECE

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 3:14:00 PM
    Wow, Mustapha, I had been fighting that Steppenwolf for many a year, but through meditation and self acceptance, he is kept down these days...Thanks for your delightful read, my friend....Peter

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 1:02:00 AM
    It does sound like the Incredible Hulk! soft mannered turn into a monster! lol s nice one M.M

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 7:27:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading the poem and the comments. We all have our monsters to battle. Well presented and thought provoking piece.

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 7:05:00 PM
    I do believe it stems from the way life evolved on this planet. Emotions are wonderful if we can deal with them sanely. I often wonder why some people seem vicious for no reason--the 1%. Then, I also understand why others are hurt and angry. All in all, the anger out there is a message that is telling those who will listen that the world should be a better place for the 99%. Your poem is elegant.

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 11:51:00 AM
    The title was very gripping- pulled me right in! And I wasn't disappointed; AMAZING poem!

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 8/28/2013 6:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne for that encouraging comment.
  1. Date: 6/23/2013 8:11:00 AM
    nice write, I have one called Monsters. that's what caught my attention ;}

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 7/5/2013 6:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Debbie for your kind comment.
  1. Date: 6/16/2013 3:23:00 AM
    this is a gripping piece well told with images that raises the senses' moods... wonderful, mus!..:) huggs

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 7/5/2013 6:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you dear Nette.Warm hugs.
  1. Date: 6/16/2013 2:04:00 AM
    Lovely brief poem giving admonition, superbly penned of course, I love it for the meaning, And thank it for the revelation mvvenkataraman

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 7/5/2013 6:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your lovely comment bud.