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My Daughter

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My Daughter

I said more to her then "than in all our life together"--
She just whimpered and moved her head a little,
Then she was gone.
We didn't say anything...
"A pure change happened"


                           My Daughter
                           "Heaney"
                            6/15/'13

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  1. Date: 7/30/2013 9:09:00 AM
    they all have their stages when they first say no i got it or stopping the hugs, *sigh*, they grow to fast, which much love, ~always, Linda

    Shelly Avatar Gabe Shelly
    Date: 7/30/2013 7:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks. g.
  1. Date: 6/18/2013 1:02:00 PM
    ... not easy and raising children - well written, Gabe! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Shelly Avatar Gabe Shelly
    Date: 6/18/2013 7:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks. gabe