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TRANSITION

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Below is the poem entitled TRANSITION which was written by poet Monterey Sirak. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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TRANSITION

Autumn wove its colorful tapestry
We stitched our young emotions
into love’s new pattern

Words    a counter-weight
holding down time    as his voice
sang of summer’s loss
His eyes caressed mine until
the setting sun hid our smiles

Overgrown now    the
forgotten path that once led
to his open heart

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  1. Date: 8/10/2013 5:52:00 PM
    rereading this one and noticed the spacing you refer to. I was only using spaces for these new contests requiring it. I am a punctuation nut, but I don't mind it missing if the poet is using great line breaks.

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 6:59:00 AM
    Great write, love the words!!! Congratulations on this piece well done......cherie

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 10:16:00 PM
    A GOOD WINNING VERSE ................ GOODNIGHT *SKAT

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 7:57:00 PM
    wow, this is an amazing one. I sure love seeing the winners of this contest and congrats to you.

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 7:32:00 PM
    great write ....Seren

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 6:52:00 PM
    Wow, this is just great. wow again. congrats to you. BG

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 4:10:00 PM
    An awesome poem. Congrats. Rick

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 1:00:00 PM
    Very nice. I would have placed it higher. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 4:39:00 PM
    Wonderful poem!

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 4:01:00 PM
    I just love this poem, so inspiring and sincere,,,

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 1:48:00 AM
    Love the tenderness of this verse Monterey!Thanks for your inspiring words at my pages.

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 5:08:00 PM
    I am honored to be the first to comment on this piece. Love has been lost but the emotions are yours to keep. Lovely poem.