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Haiku 35

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Haiku 35

                                                       the fragrance
                                                 of mimosa fills the air --
                                                  hummingbirds feast


Entered in Francine Robert's
"Old or New Five Lines or Less" contest
Category: Nature





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  1. Date: 9/3/2013 1:41:00 PM

    Great finish in the contest, another fine Haiku Kim! MC

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 7:22:00 PM

    Hello Kim, a sweet congratulations in Francine Roberts " 5 or less contest.... :-) LINDA

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 8:43:00 AM

    Kim... congrats! ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 1:11:00 AM

    I've always loved this one, Kim. Congrats on your well deserved win.

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 10:08:00 PM

    Kim congrats on your 3rd place win in the "nature" portion of the contest

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 5:36:00 AM

    While reading I sense Chanel no 5 :-)

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 12:38:00 AM

    This haiku was very poignant in both it's fragrance and color combo. Mimosa and hummingbirds... sounds delightful! I've only read one so far, but you seem to have the "essence of haiku" down!

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 9:57:00 PM

    Beautiful haiku :)- Edward

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 8:48:00 PM

    You filled my senses with this illustrious write here my friend! I truly loved reading this enlightening poem this evening! Debbie is a master of Haiku, I....ashamedly, am not very good at it, no matter how much effort she put into me! I will attempt one tonight and see how it goes, look for one, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 7:45:00 PM

    Fine haiku here! Keep it up! Peace & love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 7:05:00 PM

    Their scent is wonderful..Enjoyed reading your very creative and unique work..I was thinking the other day about writing one about a mimosa that I had come in contact with while on a long trek through the woods...Sara

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 3:05:00 PM

    So nice, KIm. I love this kind of tree. It's a tree, right? With beautiful blossoms? I was looking for one at the nursery last spring.

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 1:51:00 PM

    Kim, this Haiku is superb. Well done!! Thanks for stopping by my poetry today. Love, Gail

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 1:25:00 PM

    :) Hi, Kim! This is lovely indeed. I still can't get my haiku right though Debbie did give me pointers as well! Good job! The beauty of nature for all to see!

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 12:45:00 PM

    Yep Debbie helped me a lot too in haiku and for that im grateful..A brilliant haiku.

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 12:33:00 PM

    - Beautiful haiku, Kim! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 12:32:00 PM

    Wonderful imagery in so few words, not usually a big fan of the Haiku, unless I read one that gives me something, like an image or a thought, this one did, I enjoyed it, made me smile :)