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Alas

One's whole world changes
when you lose the one you love,
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Harry J Horsman 14/6/2013

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  1. Date: 6/18/2013 2:42:00 PM

    Hello Harry, you are the best, and I wish one day... to express a smile in person.... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 1:18:00 PM

    soup mail Harry, just for you xxx

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 12:57:00 AM

    thanks for your comments today. It's late and I need to get to bed. Otherwise, I'd search out your oldies. Hope you post a new one soon, my friend!!

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 5:44:00 PM

    Poignant and beautiful Harry, xxxVxxx

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 3:35:00 PM

    simple and so lovely exquisite write Shadow x

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 9:28:00 AM

    I like nette's "bittersweet." This one has a punch. Love, daver

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 1:41:00 PM

    Alas, indeed, our world grows smaller. And some how the ones who pass get taller.

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 9:45:00 AM

    Very deep philosophy I see here in your poem. Wonderful expression on Alas with a very few words. The circumstance is very critical, but done well. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 8:58:00 AM

    Beautifully rendered with a bittersweet touch to the splendor of this gem... i like, harry!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 6:19:00 AM

    Good morning Harry:-) Wishing every Father on the soup a Happy Father's Day.... xox...Linda

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 11:28:00 PM

    Excellent senryu. Well done.

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 2:44:00 PM

    This is good senryu writing, Harry and how sad that this scenario becomes more and more real for us with each passing year.

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 10:00:00 AM

    I really feel your words . There's been alot of loved ones pass to the other side recently. but then again there is many ways to lose the one you love. Nice way to sum it all up

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 4:56:00 AM

    Well done my friend. Rick

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 4:47:00 AM

    I cannot see that happening to you harry xx

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 3:48:00 AM

    One of your best senryu Harry..and all stated so true-Charma