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Metaphor Tree

Twiddling my thumbs you see
here beneath this metaphor tree,
just a few particles come to be
I’ve forgotten the rhythm, the rhyme, one two and the three
counting the turns, the seconds I am, twiddling free.

Twiddling my thumbs you see
dare I say thrice times, free, free, free
I am callous and jaded and utterly free
bathed in shackles as in light I have come to be
just a few particles hand in hand are me
a thought, a gripe, a moments glee
I am atom, I am tissue, I am man
I am she,
Adam and Eve, the seed, the tree.

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  1. Date: 7/15/2013 8:11:00 PM
    "an awesome win. always & forever *LINDA"

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 7:12:00 PM
    Samir, Congratulations, glad you decided to enter this free verse in my contest. :-) love ~ SKAT~

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 7:52:00 PM
    I really enjoyed reading this one. Surprised nobody else has left a comment because I think it is just a really interesting entry in the contest and I'm glad I finally saw it by reviewing the winners list. Congratulations.