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A wish for Summer

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A wish for Summer

Ah! If I could walk once again with you through the hazy pine-scented forest
and feel the trembling of your being as I your body with soft kisses caress...

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  1. Date: 6/18/2013 12:33:00 PM
    Back again David: Maybe it is my interpretation but I was looking for a verb between I and 'your body'. Or perhaps that is for me to imagine......SuZ

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 2:17:00 PM
    - It's a beautiful summer couplet, David! - Hope you will win the contest, good luck! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    De la Croes Avatar David De la Croes
    Date: 6/18/2013 12:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Anne-Lise. I appreciate your encouragement... David
  1. Date: 6/14/2013 11:06:00 AM
    Love your couplet David. Re-read once more...have you left a word behind there in the forest. SuZ

    De la Croes Avatar David De la Croes
    Date: 6/14/2013 1:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Suz. I must admit that the words I used may be misread, so I have changed it... Cheers, David