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Remembering when

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Remembering when

I remember when during a night dream
I was involved in a soccer game
And I was leader of the losing team
So, when woke up I felt an endless shame.

I remember when I was a clumsy child
Trying with the bicycle to run around
I fell to ground and my father smiled
I still remember of the crash the sound.

I remember when I had to tell my love
To a splendid girl I wanted really much
But when approaching I lost my glove
And lost the occasion to get in touch.

I remember when my mother told:
“Take care of memory of your life
You will remember when becoming old.
Have happy moments recalling your strife”

I remember when the negative events
Occurred me in winter and in fall
When people had their criminal intents
And the worst thing : I remember all.

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  1. Date: 8/29/2013 2:36:00 PM
    Hi Mario, Love the memories and your poem---I'm looking forward next week to the Amalfi coast--my wife and I are staying in Praiano!

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 5:21:00 PM
    Memory lane is a good place to vissit.It deepens the heart and polishes the soul. Thanks Mario

    DE PAZ Avatar Mario DE PAZ
    Date: 6/20/2013 7:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Michael. thank you for commenting, to visit you and your memories is nice too
  1. Date: 6/19/2013 9:35:00 AM
    Ah fabulous poetic run down memories. Enjoyd each line how u recollect in rhyme

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 4:16:00 PM
    Great message....memories are treasures that no one can steal from us.... good or bad! I hope you make only good memories from now on. Hugs

    DE PAZ Avatar Mario DE PAZ
    Date: 6/19/2013 7:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Cecilia, it was obviously irony what drove me to write this poem. My best memories are secret!
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 11:43:00 PM
    This is exactly what is needed for the contest! Your last line really caught me! Yes....we do remember the good and the bad. Enjoyed reading your poem. Thanks for your visit to my work!

    DE PAZ Avatar Mario DE PAZ
    Date: 6/19/2013 7:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dear Eileen, thank you
  1. Date: 6/16/2013 11:51:00 AM
    this is a powerful one about memories. I really enjoyed the read.

    DE PAZ Avatar Mario DE PAZ
    Date: 6/17/2013 10:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, always welcome!
  1. Date: 6/16/2013 6:13:00 AM
    Mario, I hope you have plenty of wonderful memories too my friend.. I want to thank you for reading my poems. I think you write beautiful and plan to read more.

    DE PAZ Avatar Mario DE PAZ
    Date: 6/16/2013 10:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It is a great pleasure to meet friends in this site. You are so kind and I like to visit you any time it is possible
  1. Date: 6/15/2013 8:39:00 AM
    yes, remembering could be to make a brighter day or darkened night, the last stanza says it all, enjoyed your write,.. ~always, Linda

    DE PAZ Avatar Mario DE PAZ
    Date: 6/16/2013 10:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I only tr to be unpredictable, sometimes. This is irony
  1. Date: 6/14/2013 8:54:00 AM
    Beautiful rhyme with a lovely message, I love it! Thank you!

    DE PAZ Avatar Mario DE PAZ
    Date: 6/16/2013 10:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Demetrio. I am happy you see as lovely my worst memories! Thank you for coming
  1. Date: 6/14/2013 7:44:00 AM
    good morning, Mario, I'm not feeling well this morning. I will be back, this afternoon. luv. linda