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Stars

Stars, and the moon
Stars, like the birth signs
Stars, telling your fortune 
Stars, people of our times
Stars, have you got it right
Stars, for good behaviour
Stars, there sparkling so light
Stars, studied by an astronomer
Stars, there's a distant galaxy
Stars, orbit the atmosphere
Stars, there is too so many
Stars, at night they apear
Stars, I once saw in your eyes
Stars, where have they gone
Stars, those in the night skies
Stars, look it's a shooting one






       

This spare of moment idea I wrote a year ago still been wondering wheather to put on here
wanted ito addd to it but s=not sure where to go with it 
when I was writing elements of life and mother earth
i dont know much about astrology,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
wanted to add more to this 


LOOKING FOR LAST VERSE  TO FINISH     HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

still couple verses lines not happy with just litle insight on subject

MAYBE SOMEONE COULD HELP 
INSPIERD B SOUP POETS AT TIME JAN FEB 2012............................

WRITTEN BY MYSELF DAVIDCOTT   ,,,,,,   2012>>>>>

written jan 2012

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  1. Date: 4/25/2014 5:01:00 PM
    As my sister says, it is mesmerizing. You captured the imagination here...the stars were greatly described and I loved every single line. Thanks for posting this and nice 1st poem to begin with. -DWB

  1. Date: 9/3/2013 10:33:00 AM
    Hi David... sending soup mail... enjoyed this one again... I love shooting stars.. Linda

    scott Avatar david scott
    Date: 9/3/2013 10:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks mate trying to capture that feeling here my meaning of stars xxx
  1. Date: 7/26/2013 3:53:00 PM
    This is dreamy and even has a tint of longing. Stars are so mesmerizing. Love how you implemented it into words. Always, Laura

    scott Avatar david scott
    Date: 9/3/2013 10:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thgank you for coment mate did not know where to go with this at first trying to capture a moment dxx
  1. Date: 6/18/2013 1:58:00 PM
    Hello David, i like the up date on your poem... Stars, in your eyes,,,,,,,,,,,, or...... Stars, that light up the sky..... Stars, in the night........... LOL, giving it a shot.... thank you for the comment... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 5:38:00 PM
    Make a wish and it comes true.That s what shooting stars mean to me-beautiful post Scott

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 7:24:00 PM
    oh wow David, this poem is very lovely, i love the stars, and i love your poem.... they hang very well in every line here.. Always ~ LINDA

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 12:01:00 PM
    I don't think you need to add anything to it, my dear! It is beautiful the way it is! I love stars....My dad is good at astronomy. Don't believe in astrology myself, but I do love looking at the constellations at night! Love write!