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Droplets

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Below is the poem entitled Droplets which was written by poet Shadow Hamilton. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Droplets

Water falling, trickling downward
wet mossy stones shine and glimmer
droplets dancing tumbling onward

Soft tinkles as they head coastward
the sounds echo like a crooner
water falling, trickling downward

A mast standing out, a halyard
of the ships bobbing in fervour
droplets dancing tumbling onward

Streams joining rivers flood backward
the noise  loud as it gets faster
water falling, trickling downward

Thunderous waves heading southward
ships  tossing, sails all a flutter
droplets dancing tumbling onward

Tidal water becomes wayward
waves flowing over the breaker
water falling, trickling downward
droplets dancing tumbling onward

contest: One of Your Best  wriiten06/13/2013

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  1. Date: 7/7/2013 10:41:00 AM

    Linda :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Nathan's contest!!! awesome winning write. LOVE LOVE * Linda

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/7/2013 3:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Linda Ty you have been busy reading my work really appreciate your time and feedback Hope all is now ok with you Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/4/2013 8:38:00 AM

    Loved it Shadow ...Seren

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/4/2013 6:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Seren so nice of you ty Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/2/2013 6:52:00 AM

    Shadow you've set up this scene wonderfully. Nicely done. Congratulations on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/3/2013 5:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Connie ty your encouragement is appreciated Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/2/2013 6:50:00 AM

    Congratulations! Enjoyable thoughts as we vacation on the Wisconsin River at WisDells. Took a walk along the river early this morning and am anxious to see the dam later today and take a Duck Ride.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/3/2013 5:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi sounds like you are having fun ty for stopping I Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/1/2013 9:47:00 PM

    Shadow, congratulations with your winning poem, in Nathan's one of your best poems. *SKAT*

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/3/2013 5:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi SKAT so nice of you ty congrats to you Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/1/2013 9:22:00 PM

    congrats ' NATE

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/3/2013 5:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi Nathan Ty for my place and for running contest Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 6/13/2013 8:38:00 AM

    The "Tidal water tidal" line threw me off a tad. But, not enough to keep me from adoring the atmosphere in these lines. Very nicely done! :)

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 6/13/2013 9:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Drake hi and ty I removed it stupid me. I altered that sentence a tad and forgot it grrr lol glad you still enjoyed Shadow x
  1. Date: 6/13/2013 4:43:00 AM

    Powerful as the waves, deep as the ocean, ongoing as the Amazon! Excellent work!

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 6/13/2013 4:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Demetrio not entirely happy with it lol I seemed to drift off course a bit. So really appreciate your feedback Shadow xox