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Unconditional….As you can see… My 
infatuation for her is undeniable… So the 
best way to describe her… is simply 
undescribable… So in order for me myself 
and I to rest peacefully… I have to have 
love Unconditionally… Meaning I want to 
give her every piece of me and ummmm 
excuse me if I don’t have the decency  
BUT She is all I can think of as of recently 
oh by the way excuse my language but my 
tongue is the only way I can taste her 
ecstasy…  Breathless… her lungs 
punctuating into mine… its not like she is 
killing me… I have more to live for…A True 
Angel So I’m creating a Heaven For Her… 
Lets Rewind to how it all begin… like a 
Oasis to my desert…she was hard to find…
once I did…it had me wondering if she was 
real..probably an allusion BUT… STIll!!! I 
stayed in that desert…Lived in that desert…
dreamed in that desert… only to spend 
more time with that mirage of her… that’s 
how friendship became a bond…buts 
that’s equivalent of how thirsty I was…  
But for some reason I was still holding my 
breath… WHY??? There were too many 
“Suns” looking to explore the “Center of 
that Universe”… And now I’m spiraling out 
of control…like Kanye west accident… 
COMA!!! But she kept pulling me in like I 
was a dimed light and she was the black 
hole… Momma told me about 
Unconditional Love…I didn’t listen…No true 
definition…but more of God’s Script to 
have half of the heart become whole… It’s 
just so damn hard to conceive it… But 
honestly I needed her like the air that I 
breathe… Live for today and not for 
Tomorrow… She is my Today Tomorrow 
and Forever… The serenity of 
understanding and the absence of fear 
made my move close to her and closer to 
the master… Master put us together… my 
last chance was my first choice… God put 
us together like the pieces to the puzzle… I 
am fortunate… To have you Girl is the 
words I sing to her like I was Usher and 
she was Chilli… Staring at her love like it 
was a picture and I see all of the 
realization of my dreams coming true…
Unconditional Love Is Here… Being in that 
desert made everything perfectly clear… 
That looking into your eyes was actually 
me looking into my soul… tracing your 
silhouette body… to grasping onto your 
lips…Unconditional Love… There is no 
magic potion…no hex or spell required…No 
Degree…No Doctrine acquired…no 
formula…no recipe to make…no code 
words to recite or codes to be retrieved…
this is love I convey to you…I convey to 
you… like personalized concrete made 
from me for you to walk on… or a second 
heart placed on the right side of the chest 
made from me for you because I knew you 
were right for me…Its just Unconditional 
love baby… For Love it’s never a question 
within my mind… You Are My Lady, My 

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