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Breeze part two

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Breeze part two

She's like the breeze 
That makes memories freeze
In the door ways 
Of my mind's hallways 
Each vision replays always
On the second day!
Goddess of my imagination
Leaving shadows of heavenly formation
In complete relation
To my ciphers rotation!

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  1. Date: 11/1/2013 10:17:00 AM
    It is good that you have a cipher to enable you to discover all of her mysteries.

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 2:08:00 PM
    Hello Hakim, wow, what a Goddess she is to you... a lovely breeze, love the complexion of you and the complete feeling she gives you... always...your fan..Linda

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    Date: 6/18/2013 3:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am glad you enjoyed it, these poets can be so darn passionate at times... lol
  1. Date: 6/14/2013 5:42:00 AM
    Dynamite! Well penned.

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    Date: 6/14/2013 7:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Mustapha!
  1. Date: 6/13/2013 5:33:00 AM
    Welcome to the Soup. Rick

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    Date: 6/13/2013 5:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Rick!
  1. Date: 6/12/2013 8:31:00 PM
    You are one of my fav poets now my friend....keep burning!!

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    Date: 6/13/2013 5:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am flattered, thank you!