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Affliction

The darkness of light impossible to see the pain and the lies always damaging you reach and get burned not understanding this is my disease nature of the beast Suddenly my light is taken away my darkness was revealed taking me as slave when all I ever wanted was for someone to say please stop, for me or enter an early grave Now face to face with all of my demons how can I fight them if I don't want to beat them until the reason arrives, then I shine a little at first but that small thing, is mine The den of ten thieves come up with a plan a whole set of new lies that every single man cannot resist believing it's seeming to be that a horrific ending is just what I need Then all of the sudden my small shine swallows time and with that virtue my face comes to life I would never hurt you please, know this to be yet no one believes me this curse grows like a tree I hate my helpless fate why can't I make a new life for me that no one can take why can't I escape a prison not for me for years I accept this tired sense of defeat The small shine barely intact, inside until Saint Anger starts to burn me, alive I find I'm set off by my wrong, senseless self until I am talking to no one, in Hell So I pick up my pen power to create a new world for me where I design my escape in my invisible state the Devil don't notice that one of his children is no longer hopeless I stop all my madness by power of pen for years my sword drew nothing but sin the yin and the yang both helped me to find that I'm no longer afflicted when darkness lights my bright shine.

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  1. Date: 12/16/2013 10:30:00 PM
    This right here, this did it for me: So I pick up my pen power to create a new world for me where I design my escape in my invisible state the Devil don't notice that one of his children is no longer hopeless Wonderful

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    Date: 12/17/2013 2:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks brother...I am going through a spell maybe worst ever. It is there for me like it always has been man, I am just sharing it because it helped me writing it to distract a tirelessly self hatefilled mind. You inspire me I needed that compliment :)
  1. Date: 6/12/2013 8:55:00 PM
    Hey BJ. i have difficulties finding you in FB. every damn time i search BJ Fard. search directs me to BJ Ford. whats going on FB nowadays. sucks. maybe my name is easier to find, you can add me instead.

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 1:35:00 AM
    last paragraph looks like a nuclear bomb. another nice poem.