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I made your laugh

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© G. V., 8/24/2012 All Rights Reserved
(Iambic tetrameter)

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I made your laugh

The blooms wore out in fading light;
opaque the molecules of air,
and that continuum brought night,
returning beasts and men to lair.

The faded blooms transmit in blur,
defined on sepia to last,
a phase unreal to incur
engraved our words on soul's mold cast.

Chrysanthemums became dark shades;
perfumed the night in minds to nest,
You laughed; My entity erewhile evades
to be night solitude's best guest.

Neglected was the feast of ne'er
- and passing years augment the count,
I made your laugh my solemn flare,
and builder of a lone surmount.

This longing turned my pride to be,
a reason to avoid the fair
invited guest and cedar tree
while void in front absorbed my stare. 

© G.V. 8/24/2012
(Iambic tetrameter)

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  1. Date: 9/11/2013 4:43:00 PM
    I can relate to the solemn sound of silence that you described here. Loneliness can definitely leave one surrounded by darkness. This poem was very deep and emotional. A fantastic piece of work! I am also adding this one to my favorites!...My poem "Lonely Soul" has a very similar theme to this one.

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 1:21:00 PM
    So much to ponder about in this poem...somehow made me feel how dark solitude can be almost like death itself..Tnks for sharing.

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 9:22:00 PM
    Hahahah. there you made my laugh

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 1:37:00 PM
    Always a mystery that I'd rather not unravel just partake in it's beauty Love and peace xxx