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At the Carnival

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At the Carnival

Candy floss and carousels
Bumper cars and clowns on stilts
The evening sparkles with stars bright
You and me, the perfect couple, a perfect night
 
You hold my hand as we walk between stalls
You win me a gigantic teddy bear by throwing balls
You scoop me up and spin me around
Just like that your love takes me off the ground
 
You put me down gently and kiss me on my forehead
I can hear the kiss comes with an “I love you” but nothing was said
You take a moment and just stare down at me
If only you knew my future in your eyes I see
 
On the Ferris wheel we hold hands and kiss
That’s the moment we both make a wish
The carnival music plays in the background
The chemistry between us has me spellbound 
 
You take my hand and place it on your heart
You promise me that we will never part
You tell me you see your future in my eyes too
Right there you propose and I answered “I do”

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  1. Date: 9/15/2013 4:41:00 AM
    oh how i wish i was eating candy floss now thank you wonderful work.

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 11:07:00 PM
    a poem well done Minnie. Stopping by with a sweet smile and a warm Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless.......... Hugs* "SKAT"

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 2:15:00 PM
    Minnie, congratulations with this proposal. the I DO, says it all..... a lovely little sweet tale and memory to always treasure. . Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 12:39:00 PM
    - Hi Minnie, enjoyable with new members in P-Soup - I will welcome you, and thank you for your first poem. - I hope there will be many more in the future. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)