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haiku 11

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haiku 11

white roses
collect diamond dew drops--
a choir sings

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  1. Date: 6/21/2013 10:47:00 PM
    Beautiful short poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 7:30:00 AM
    Beautiful picture, sounds heavenly.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 6/14/2013 7:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Now as I read the comments I see your poem resulted in the same reaction with Demeatrios.
  1. Date: 6/13/2013 1:32:00 AM
    beautiful

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 1:14:00 PM
    NINJA

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 4:39:00 AM
    beautiful

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 4:27:00 AM
    H E A V E N L Y B E A U T I F U L!

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 11:19:00 PM
    goodness, this is good. Looking down at Eileen's comment, I guess I did not even see it her way at first, but I bet she got it right. Did she? I was thinking at first it was nature and the choir were the insects and birds. Silly me!!

    Dietrich Avatar Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 6/12/2013 2:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    but others saw it your way. I just don't always get things as easily!!
    Ober Avatar Heather Ober
    Date: 6/12/2013 1:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Andrea, to be honest, I hadn't even thought of it that way. It was meant to be a snapshot of a moment at a funeral. That's why I LOVE poetry - everyone has different interepretations and none of them are wrong :)
    Ober Avatar Heather Ober
    Date: 6/12/2013 1:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    *interpretations
  1. Date: 6/11/2013 8:38:00 PM
    Oh.....how sad....I know those dew drops well. Beautiful in every way, my dear...you are incredible

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 8:12:00 AM
    Sounds heavenly.

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 7:37:00 AM
    So full of melancholic depth. I expect nothing less from you. This was incredible.