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  1. Date: 8/22/2013 10:55:00 AM
    I hate to repeat myself so many times because I'm afraid it comes across as trite or insincere, but as I have told other poets here, you have some truly beautiful verses in your piece. I especially loved "seeing only your face in every season" and "longing in every way defined". This is a beautifully crafted piece; kudos! :)

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 3:31:00 PM
    Rain bows of Butterflys from your heart . Thank you Lady Catie.

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 7:13:00 AM
    Nature and Love. Beautiful and loved every line. You write from the heart.

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 2:14:00 PM
    For someone who doesn't like country music, you sure chose a hook that's got country all over it... The idea of "Got you on my mind" is woven into a lot of "country" music... The genre of Country has changed a lot since the 40's and 50's. I love the way you put this one together. It has heart and that's the first step to "country." .... Love ya dearly.... Jake

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 7:52:00 AM
    Beautiful piece, the first line "Brightly colored Monarch wings fluttering in and out of time" drew me in, that's a wonderful image, and the rest of the poem didn't disappoint, a great read.

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 10:12:00 AM
    I could actually be swept away by this beauty Catie; really awesome to read you again ;) how you doing!? oxoxo

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 10:28:00 PM
    Ps., Actually, This Is Very Beautiful And I Am Going To Favour It's Loveliness To Join Yes, Your Own.

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 10:16:00 PM
    What Was That Willie Nelson Song, You Were Always On My Mind, You Were Always On My Mind. Hi Catie, Someone Sounds As Though Perhaps Their Heart Be Enraptured Amid The Sounds Of Love's Sweet Music ? Few Express In Verse It's Splendours Quite As Wonderfully As You. Lovely, And Thank You For Your Somewhat Humorous Visit; Yes, I Like It Like That. Love, John

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 6:51:00 PM
    Very lyrical and I agree with some other comments that this could be a beautiful love song...eloquent :)

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 3:32:00 PM
    amazing poetry Catie, just love this...yes this could be a wonderful song,,,

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 2:01:00 PM
    Almost reads like a Country music song. I hate Country music. But, I love this!!!! True story. :) "Got you on my mind", YEE HAW!

    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey
    Date: 6/10/2013 2:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are so funny, Drake! I hate country also. ha ha . Thanks for stopping by. hugs, catie :)