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by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 9/25/2013 10:46:00 AM
    My heart and soul swooned as I read that first stanza; achingly beautiful. My only critique, my esteemed friend, is that in line 7, "is" should be "are" and in line 12, I think you should change it to "Let us bade one last adieu". But trust me when I tell you, they do not in any way detract from the astounding beauty of this poem. You had me swooning with every line in every stanza. I absolutely adore this poem; going into my favorites :)

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 2:17:00 AM
    Another beautiful write...you are very talented...

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 6:47:00 PM
    "When morn had burst the harbors/ With a burning sigh we knew" Beautiful lines, Mustapha! Very nice. Ruben.

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 6/10/2013 7:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Ruben,so nice of you to grace me with a lovely feedback champ. :)
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 2:58:00 PM
    I like your drama M M xxx

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 6/10/2013 6:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Rose :)
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 11:27:00 AM
    This poem very flows..and the rhyme is beautiful..amazing..! :)

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 6/10/2013 3:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Shirley,thanks for that wonderful comment my dear.Sending warm greetings your way.
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 11:04:00 AM
    you move me with this flawless, soulful write, mus... fine word choices that are woven deeply without being too heavy... just wow!..:) huggs

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 6/10/2013 3:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Nette,thanks for that moving comment.I dont know what say but thanks and big hugs to you.
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 8:02:00 AM
    dear M.M this brought tears so sad yet written by a loving hand I love it love Shadow xox

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 6/10/2013 3:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Shadow dear for your lovely comment.A bit of a forlorn write today my friend...smiles :)