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Emotive Feelings

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Emotive Feelings

The night comes upon us swiftly with peace Lanterns are lit outside above the streets Light seems to be reflected, every piece There’s a rhythm of the night, some great beats And I intensely hear the perfect sounds Lanterns are lit outside above the streets There are surely sulfur smells which abounds Nothing compares to the real sight of light And I intensely hear the perfect sounds These emotive feelings are felt at night A wonderful sight of light reflecting Nothing compares to the real sight of light The light bouncing around is infecting Candles are in the windows to invite A wonderful sight of light reflecting Evening is lit up with lots of delight The night comes upon us swiftly with peace Candles are in the windows to invite Light seems to be reflected, every piece
Russell Sivey Contest: anything goes Sponsor: Kim Morrison 6/10/2013

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  1. Date: 6/16/2013 4:34:00 AM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 5:15:00 PM
    I love your work Russell! In my humble opinion this one is very well crafted. Congrats! Kim

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 7:59:00 PM
    I am very fond of this form and you have done an excellent job. Simply a lovely piece.

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 4:20:00 PM
    Never compare yourself Russell, If I were to compare, I am certain I could never light up a lantern as easy as you do, I could only dream of writing in so many forms as you do, but I am content to write in my own limited way and I am content in partaking in yours, love you my friend, always will, take care Your know who xxx

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 6/10/2013 7:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You are not limited Rose, you are very talented.
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 9:43:00 AM
    such a delicate write, rusell... i can feel the soothing mood of this piece with lights aglow... and images, rhyme scheme that simply ignite the senses.. wonderful job!.. thnaks for your las visit on my page.... the rhyme pattern is 10/8/10/6... :) huggs!

    onclaud Avatar nette onclaud
    Date: 6/10/2013 9:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ' thanks for your last visit'
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 6:56:00 AM
    Serenity fills the night as the light is reflected upon our souls! Wonderful and peaceful poem, certainly a candidate for a winner! 7! Good luck!

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 4:09:00 AM
    lovely Russell gl in contest Shadow x

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 12:44:00 AM
    Curious to know more about those "sulfur smells". When I was little and my family took a trip to Yellowstone, those geysers were practically exploding with the smell of sulfur (which to me smelled exactly like rotten eggs). I like the feelings you emit from the night... most think it's a scary time where nothing but bad stuff happens... truth be told it's really quite peaceful. Enjoyed your poem.

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 11:59:00 PM
    Lovely stuff from you Russell.Enjoyable read indeed.