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Agony

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Agony

Sound of dying trees
Covered with orange and red
Such a wondrous death.



~ Haikuette
For Debbie Guzzi Haiku Wannabee Contest


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  1. Date: 6/11/2013 6:58:00 PM
    I think this is the first piece of yours Ive read. I like, and congrats. BG

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 4:34:00 PM
    a very gripping poem....... Shirley, good luck in the contest...........*Skat

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 3:36:00 PM
    Someone wrote a poem about the leaves on trees dying and floating away as an allegory for children leaving their family or mother. It was sad. It is remarkable how you have written about the cycle of life in such a positive and beautiful way.

    Candy Avatar Shirley Candy
    Date: 6/10/2013 7:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Without sadness there is no joy. Vice versa. Thank you for taking times commenting on my poems. Really appreciate it. :)
  1. Date: 6/9/2013 10:22:00 PM
    As if Mother Nature was giving the new life, away from this world...this was very deep in such few lines. Wonderful job!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 6/10/2013 6:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I couldn't agree more with you.
    Candy Avatar Shirley Candy
    Date: 6/10/2013 11:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I wish people can be more caring of the nature of the future goodness.. :/
  1. Date: 6/9/2013 4:29:00 PM
    This is so interesting, making the silent trees have sound!!! sound thru color!

    Candy Avatar Shirley Candy
    Date: 6/9/2013 6:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the review, Andrea :)
  1. Date: 6/9/2013 3:49:00 PM
    I like your haiku Shirley.I think the title threw me off a bit when I read your lovely Haiku.

    Candy Avatar Shirley Candy
    Date: 6/9/2013 4:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Although haiku actually should not be entitled.. :D
    Candy Avatar Shirley Candy
    Date: 6/9/2013 3:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the comment, M :) I used the word "agony" as title to describe the intense feelings of suffering of the dying nature, which is very lamentable.