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Untouched

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Untouched

fire spreads quickly
animals scurry to safety
red rose untouched 


Haiku Wannabe contest 

Trillinea O first attempt at this form. 
I could not find on the soup so I labeled
it as a Haiku.

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  1. Date: 6/12/2013 3:56:00 PM
    Nice write...Congrats on your win,dear friend..

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 6/12/2013 6:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks A.O you are always so encouraging.
  1. Date: 6/11/2013 7:37:00 PM
    Try always for the less used image, think out of the box, there is another use for the word rose, [pinecones explode/ as pitch ignites orange flames rose/ the land erodes] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 6/13/2013 8:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Please forgive my comment, for some reason your comment rubbed me the wrong way. I know that was not your intention so I would like to take back my comment.
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 6/12/2013 6:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I find it ironic that you would use the phrase think outside of the box as a way for me to be more innovative. It must be the most overused phrase in the English language, every time I hear it I want to gag.
  1. Date: 6/11/2013 12:42:00 AM
    hey, I LIKE how you got the rose reference in there. Good work!! wish I could think something up for this one.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 6/11/2013 6:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am sure you will.
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 2:25:00 AM
    Well done, and I wish you all the best for the contest! :)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 6/10/2013 6:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Kate
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 12:50:00 AM
    Nice that the fire was kind enough to at least not harm the rose! If this was your first haiku, it's much better than my first attempt! It's quite imaginative...

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 6/10/2013 6:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It is a trillinea O 4/8/4. I have never heard of the form but it was one of the options available for Debbie's contest.
  1. Date: 6/9/2013 8:31:00 PM
    :) Good luck on the contest with this lovely write, Richard.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 6/9/2013 8:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Eileen
  1. Date: 6/9/2013 2:33:00 PM
    - Beautiful, Richard! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 6/9/2013 2:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Anne Lise.