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Adultery- The Pain

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Adultery- The Pain

Is life fair?
It seems like no-one cares

How far would you go?
For the things you love so?

We had love for each other
I became a mother

We said till death do us part
Did I misunderstand, am I not smart?

You said she was nothing to you
But when she enters the room, we became two

What went wrong?
Wasn’t our love strong?

I blame her for everything, especially the sorrow
Because of her there is no tomorrow

God must forgive me for what I’m gonna do
But if I cannot have you, she will never have you too

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  1. Date: 6/10/2013 8:17:00 PM
    Hi shanon, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 9:34:00 PM
    Hello Shanon, sometimes we are pushed to the limit, and we only react to others action. I like your couplet poem... Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda

    Jacobs Avatar Shanon Jacobs
    Date: 6/10/2013 7:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Linda, thank you, I will do just that.....love the drama and love theme, lol! I will fit right in. You want new poems on your contest or these ones? Thanks for the warm WELCOME, much appreciated and i will be writing up a storm.... keep well and chat soon, soon:)
  1. Date: 6/9/2013 9:54:00 AM
    Very forlorn words you painted here Shanon but a common reality that no doubt many can relate to.A sublime write friend.

    Jacobs Avatar Shanon Jacobs
    Date: 6/10/2013 8:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You, Shanon taking abow:)
  1. Date: 6/9/2013 9:30:00 AM
    They say.. "There is none so angry as a woman scorned". Great poem on such a common, sad occurrence of modern society

    Jacobs Avatar Shanon Jacobs
    Date: 6/10/2013 8:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanx Kim, much appreciated!